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Need a New Life by ~attoo:iconattoo:



I can't take it any more,
My life, here.
I don't want to be here any more,
To live, here.

I need a new start,
Need a new life.
I need another life,
I can't be here any more.

I wish he could come and get me,
Take me away from this darkness.
But how is that possible?
When he's so far away?

I just wish he could understand,
That this is just some written words.
It's what I feel, what I mean, what I need.

The darkness is also here,
It really is here in my life.
I've told you this before,
He is my only light.

It is a very small light, in the big darkness,
But I don't got much hope.
I don't know if I'll get to meet him,
Now, or will we be together in my next life?
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FINE! >.< just tell me if you hate it :depressed: or..dislike :B

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:iconnerdwork9:
I liked it! good work!

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:icongreencarpet:
This is a very good poem. It flows nicely, and I really like the bit "It is a very small light, in the big darkness" its a lovely metaphor, gives me a strong mental image of a person, sitting in like, a great hall, with only a lighter for light. Very nice.

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Education is an admirable thing, but it is well to remember from time to time that nothing that is worth knowing can be taught.What is a cynic? A man who knows the price of everything and the value of nothing.
:iconblackheart276:
I loves it.... now gwt outta my head! XD

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Carpe Diem (Seize The Day)

Live each day as if it were your last, because you never know what the future will bring you.


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:iconattoo:
THANKS FOR THE HUGE COMMENT! :iconimhappyplz:
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:iconattoo:
:rofl: OMFG! THIS IS WEEIRD!! XDD
:iconblackheart276:
XDDDDDDDDDDDDDD :lol: Yeah. btw kick ass job as ALWAYS! :glomp:

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Carpe Diem (Seize The Day)

Live each day as if it were your last, because you never know what the future will bring you.


:heart: Avatar made for me by my dear friend ~xGrimFirex :heart:
:iconyami-tsuki-chan:
Supernice. :3 :+fav:

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"Whenever you think it's over..."
:iconattoo:
Superthanks. :3 :giggle:

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